Here's Fallen Empires. Hope to get The Dark done tonight also. Waiting for
VI/WE and HL/AL to come back from you (your uuencoded files didn't contain
any of the four). While going over the for-release Mirage version, and the
Ice Age version, noticed a few more things - noted below. (I've made changes
in my versions of the protoOracle for MI and IA corresponding to each of these:
tell me which you want _not_ to do & I'll change them back, or just send the
whole file if you want.)

- Dave

[Changes:
(Floodgate, Wave Elemental, Crimson Roc, Chaosphere, Subterranean Spirit,
 Torrent of Lava, Barbed Foliage in Mirage: We changed stuff in Ice Age to
 "nonflying" - do these too. Yes, this is in an entirely-different
 released-already set... We _probably_ want to put together a set of "Template
 these this way??" notes based on our experience here. But after we're done...)
(Soul Rend/MI: "A creature destroyed this way can't be regenerated".)
(Hall of Gemstone/MI: "Until end of turn, ..." -> "... when tapped for mana
 this turn.")
(Delirium/MI: "opponents' " -> "opponent's".)
(Call to Arms/IA: "Calls to Arms" -> "Call to Arms".)
(Brainstorm/IA: "from your hand" -> "chosen from your hand".)
(Krovikan Sorcerer/IA: Add one more "choose and".)
(Balduvian Conjurer/IA: -> "that's still a snow-covered land".)
(Magus of the Unseen/IA: "You control" -> "Gain control of". (My bad.))
(Howl from Beyond/IA: There seems to be an extra "+X/+0" line just before the
 card title. Delete it.)
(Dread Wight/IA: "That creature does" -> "Each of those creatures does". "on
 it. It gains" -> "on it and gains".)
(Chaos Lord/IA: No no no! "Target opponent gains". If it's -your- upkeep, and
 the number of permanents is even, you _lose_ control of it. And this is only
 done during -controller's- upkeep, not during -everyone's- upkeep. (There
 appears to be a Bug in the Oracle translation of this ability... check the
 card wording. I bet someone was looking at Chaos _Moon's_ wording and just
 decided to apply it to Chaos _Lord_ as well...))
(Forgotten Lore/IA needs "As many times as you like, you may...")
(Thoughtleech/IA _really really_ needs that "As ~ comes into play, choose an
 opponent" clause...)
(Snow-Covered Island/IA: "a Island" -> "an Island".)
Icatian Infantry x2, Icatian Scout, Order of Leitbur, Tidal Flats, River
 Merfolk, Vodalian Knights, Order of the Ebon Hand, Orcish Veteran, Goblin
 Kites: "has" -> "gains".
Homarid Warrior: "phase" -> "step"
Basal Thrull, Tourach's Gate, Orcish Spy: capitalized "ocT".
Farrel's Zealot, Farrel's Mantle:
 Switched order so damage-prevention is a consequence.
Icatian Skirmishers: "are" -> "is".
Farrel's Mantle: Rewrote so the enchantment gives the ability to the creature.
 [So that its controller, rather than FM's controller, uses it/is 'you'/etc.]
High Tide: -> "Whenever a player taps an island for mana this turn, it
 produces one additional blue mana."
Svyelunite Priest: Added "Play this ability only during your upkeep".
Vodalian War Machine: Rewrote last ability a bit to clarify "either ability" &
 exactly what can't regenerate. (Don't know _why_ they can't regenerate - the
 original card _doesn't_ say "bury"...)
Seasinger, Thrull Champion: Deleted 'a'.
Homarid Warrior, Deep Spawn: "your next untap" -> "its controller's next untap"
Mindstab Thrull, Dwarven Armorer: Added 'chooses and'.
Tourach's Gate: Added "can enchant only a land you control". Made the "if there
 are no time counters" into a separate triggered ability.
Soul Exchange: Added "target".
Brassclaw Orcs: "Can't be assigned to block" -> "Brassclaw Orcs can't block".
Dwarven Catapult: "an opponent's" -> "target opponent's".
Goblin Flotilla: Reworded so that it affects GF, not "creatures"... so that
 it can affect creatures not currently in play/not currently creatures when it
 resolves.
Orcish Captain: Deleted 'Choose target Orc.'; changed first "that Orc" to
 "target Orc".
Raiding Party: -> "controls. Each player chooses zero, one, or two
 plains for each white creature that player tapped this way."
Elvish Scout: "and remove it from combat" -> "Prevent all combat damage that
 would be dealt to or dealt by that creature this turn"
Thelon's Curse: Deleted "All". Changed second ability to an upkeep-triggered
 ability. (Original card enforces once-per-turn...)
Thelonite Druid: "They still count as lands" -> "that are still lands".
Delif's Cone: Made it optional ["may"]; rewrote to get rid of 'deals no damage
 in combat' and to instead 'prevent all combat damage that...'. Made it back
 into a delayed ability - use the ability _before_ blockers are declared.
Delif's Cube: Rewrote "deals no damage in combat" -> "prevent all combat
 damage".
Rainbow Vale: Rearranged to make a _bit_ clearer that target opponent isn't
 chosen until end of turn...
Icatian Store, Sand Silos, Hollow Trees, Bottomless Vault, Dwarven Hold:
 Rewrote the "you may choose not to untap" and "put a storage counter" two
 abilities into one replacement ability for untapping it during untap step. To
 restore the idea of "put the storage counter on _instead_". Yes, this makes it
 not get one if it can't untap for some other reason... but look at original
 wording...]

Icatian Infantry
W
Creature - Soldier
White
1/1
o1: Icatian Infantry gains banding until end of turn.
o1: Icatian Infantry gains first strike until end of turn.

Icatian Scout
W
Creature - Soldier
White
1/1
o1, ocT: Target creature gains first strike until end of turn.

Combat Medic
2W
Creature - Soldier
White
0/2
o1oW: Prevent the next 1 damage that would be dealt this turn to target
creature or player.

Order of Leitbur
WW
Creature - Cleric
White
2/1
Protection from black
oWoW: Order of Leitbur gets +1/+0 until end of turn.
oW: Order of Leitbur gains first strike until end of turn.

Icatian Moneychanger
W
Creature - Townsfolk
White
0/2
Icatian Moneychanger comes into play with three credit counters on it. /
When Icatian Moneychanger comes into play, it deals 3 damage to you. /
At the beginning of your upkeep, put a credit counter on Icatian
Moneychanger. /
Sacrifice Icatian Moneychanger: You gain 1 life for each credit counter
on Icatian Moneychanger. Play this ability only during your upkeep.

Farrel's Zealot
1WW
Creature - Townsfolk
White
2/2
Whenever Farrel's Zealot attacks and isn't blocked, you may have it deal
3 damage to target creature. If you do, prevent all combat damage that
would be dealt by Farrel's Zealot this turn.

Icatian Javelineers
W
Creature - Soldier
White
1/1
Icatian Javelineers comes into play with one javelin counter on it. /
ocT, Remove a javelin counter from Icatian Javelineers: Icatian
Javelineers deals 1 damage to target creature or player.

Icatian Priest
W
Creature - Cleric
White
1/1
o1oWoW: Target creature gets +1/+1 until end of turn.

Icatian Town
5W
Sorcery
White
Put four 1/1 white Citizen creature tokens into play.

Icatian Phalanx
4W
Creature - Soldier
White
2/4
Banding

Icatian Skirmishers
3W
Creature - Soldier
White
1/1
Banding, first strike
When Icatian Skirmishers is declared as an attacker, all creatures
banded with it gain first strike until end of turn.

Farrelite Priest
1WW
Creature - Cleric
White
1/3
o1: Add one white mana to your mana pool. If more than o3 is spent this
way during one turn, sacrifice Farrelite Priest at end of turn.

Icatian Lieutenant
WW
Creature - Soldier
White
1/2
o1oW: Target Soldier gets +1/+0 until end of turn.

Hand of Justice
5W
Creature - Avatar
White
2/6
ocT, Tap three untapped white creatures you control: Destroy target
creature.

Heroism
2W
Enchantment
White
Sacrifice a white creature: For each attacking red creature, prevent all
combat damage that would be dealt by that creature this turn unless the
attacking player pays o2oR.

Farrel's Mantle
2W
Enchant Creature
White
Enchanted creature has "Whenever this creature attacks and isn't blocked, you
 may have it deal X+2 damage to target creature, where X is this creature's
 power. If you do, prevent all combat damage that would be dealt this turn by
 this creature.".

Merseine
2UU
Enchant Creature
Blue
Merseine comes into play with three net counters on it. /
Enchanted creature doesn't untap during its controller's untap step as
long as there are any net counters on Merseine. /
Pay enchanted creature's converted mana cost: Remove a net counter. Only
enchanted creature's controller may play this ability.

Homarid
2U
Creature - Homarid
Blue
2/2
Homarid comes into play with a tide counter on it. /
At the beginning of your upkeep, put a tide counter on Homarid. /
As long as there is exactly one tide counter on Homarid, it gets -1/-1.  /
As long as there are exactly three tide counters on Homarid, it gets
+1/+1.  /
Whenever there are four tide counters on Homarid, remove all tide
counters on it. /

High Tide
U
Instant
Blue
Whenever a player taps an island for mana this turn, it produces one
additional blue mana.

Homarid Warrior
4U
Creature - Homarid
Blue
3/3
oU: Homarid Warrior can't be the target of spells or abilities this turn
and doesn't untap during its controller's next untap step. Tap Homarid
Warrior.

Tidal Flats
U
Enchantment
Blue
oUoU: For each creature you control which is blocking a creature without
flying, that creature gains first strike until end of turn unless the
attacking player pays o1.

Vodalian Mage
2U
Creature - Merfolk
Blue
1/1
oU, ocT: Counter target spell unless that spell's controller pays o1.

Vodalian Soldiers
1U
Creature - Merfolk
Blue
1/2

Svyelunite Priest
1U
Creature - Merfolk
Blue
1/1
oUoU, ocT: Target creature can't be the target of spells or abilities
this turn. Play this ability only during your upkeep.

Vodalian War Machine
1UU
Creature - Wall
Blue
0/4
#(Walls can't attack.)#
Tap an untapped Merfolk you control: Vodalian War Machine may attack
this turn as though it weren't a Wall. /
Tap an untapped Merfolk you control: Vodalian War Machine gets +2/+1
until end of turn. /
When Vodalian War Machine is put into a graveyard, destroy all Merfolk
tapped this turn to pay the activation cost of an ability of Vodalian
War Machine. Merfolk destroyed this way can't regenerate.

River Merfolk
UU
Creature - Merfolk
Blue
2/1
oU: River Merfolk gains mountainwalk until end of turn. #(This creature is
unblockable as long as defending player controls a mountain.)#

Seasinger
1UU
Creature - Merfolk
Blue
0/1
When you control no islands, sacrifice Seasinger. /
ocT: Gain control of target creature whose controller controls an
island as long as you control Seasinger and Seasinger is tapped. /
You may choose not to untap Seasinger during your untap step.

Deep Spawn
5UUU
Creature - Homarid
Blue
6/6
Trample
At the beginning of your upkeep, sacrifice Deep Spawn unless you put the
top two cards of your library into your graveyard. /
oU: Deep Spawn can't be the target of spells or abilities this turn and
doesn't untap during its controller's next untap step. Tap Deep Spawn.

Vodalian Knights
1UU
Creature - Merfolk
Blue
2/2
First strike, islandhome #(This creature can't attack unless defending
player controls an island. When you control no island, sacrifce this
creature.)#
oU: Vodalian Knights gains flying until end of turn.

Homarid Shaman
2UU
Creature - Homarid
Blue
2/1
oU: Tap target green creature.

Tidal Influe